Caroline Rolley’s Reviews > Tears of the Broken > Status Update
Caroline Rolley
is 35% done
Why on EARTH did I not read the other reviews before picking up this "Twilight rewrite"? I rarely leave a book unfinished... I'm tempted now tho!! Twilight was horrible enough, this feels like an Aussie take on the story. Change a few things to keep the copyright police away.... So disappointed.
— Jul 11, 2013 11:11AM
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Caroline Rolley
is 79% done
One reviewer mentioned the strange prologue that doesn't seem to have anything to do with the story; I believe it's to let us know that Ara's "death at birth" she'll be vamp material. Hope it comes soon cause I doubt I'll read any further books in this series.
— Jul 12, 2013 10:30AM
Caroline Rolley
is 79% done
This reads like Twilight fan fiction. I know there are those who will complain that I keep mentioning Twilight in my reviews, but this book not only gets close to directly quoting Twi, it also brings up Twi!
— Jul 12, 2013 10:30AM
Caroline Rolley
is 29% done
ok... I'm seriously confused. I know it's written in Aussie-English... but is it set in the USA or what? Every character speaks Aussie but they mention flags on the 4th of July? If you're going to write Aussie, that's fine, but here in the USA, we don't. Also... is she scarred? It's mentioned then seems to be forgotten. She's shy, then she's outgoing, then she's shy.... pick a trait!!
— Jul 11, 2013 10:35AM
