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I could be amused by this, except... Americanisms. They drag me out of it. Cookies instead of biscuits. Pants instead of trousers. Mom instead of mum (or plain ol' formal "mother"). If it's set in Victorian Britain with posh Victorian British characters, then why would they say these things? Ick. I know, picky when it's going to turn into a litrpg, but the real world bits should at least be more... real-worldy.
— Jul 19, 2020 03:15AM
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OldBird
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This is ridiculous and I commend it for being so. Bit basic writing sometimes, a little naive and with a few random apostrophies and word choices, but by no means terrible. Not sure I'm one for all these "she slashed at x monster, it went 25 HP down, oh no, debuff!" sequences, but if you like that kinda thing. I doubt her *ahem* bosom movement would be that comfortable in a metal bikini though. Corsets = less wobble.
— Jul 19, 2020 08:54AM
