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is 10% done
Getting off to a real slow start here, lots of pointless detail and not so much story. Note to authors: don't spend pages describing things just for the sake of describing things, if the details don't move the plot then think twice before adding them...
— Jul 14, 2020 12:10PM
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Chris
is 10% done
Getting off to a real slow start here, lots of pointless detail and not so much story. Note to authors: don't spend pages describing things just for the sake of describe things, if the details don't move the plot then think twice before adding them...
— Jul 14, 2020 12:09PM
Chris
is 10% done
Getting off to a real slow start here, lots of pointless detail and not so much story.
— Jul 14, 2020 12:04PM
