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Nancy
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The diner had not emptied while he was outside talking with Elle, in fact it had gotten busier with locals. That is why Layla had called her inside. I really dislike inconsistencies.
— Jul 02, 2013 07:17AM
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Nancy
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Elle says its the day after the full moon but at the beginning of this chapter it Brandon was next to the river "several days later" I don't like those kinds of inconsistencies
— Jul 02, 2013 07:07AM
Nancy
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The speech is quite choppy and somewhat stilted. There is a fair bit of crass language...I'm not sure how else to describe it but I'm not a huge fan of the 'c' word. Elle seems a bit ignorant of the society in which she lives. So am I. What the heck is going to happen other then a hunt and a feast? Hhhhmmmm. You would think that if they have guests most full moons then they would be more organised for them.
— Jul 02, 2013 01:21AM
Nancy
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Ok hardly into the book and I already think Brandon is a complete bastard...I'm now on the look for redeeming qualities.
— Jul 02, 2013 12:43AM
