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is 39% done
This might be a DNF
1. I am bored...given the title, I might have guessed.
2. The characterisation of Devon (not all black ppl are on drugs or work to rehabilitate those who are or consider the quest for self evolution to be "white people's problems) *sigh* is tiresome.
3. The writing is amateurish and stiff. Requires an editor.
— Jun 29, 2013 07:38AM
1. I am bored...given the title, I might have guessed.
2. The characterisation of Devon (not all black ppl are on drugs or work to rehabilitate those who are or consider the quest for self evolution to be "white people's problems) *sigh* is tiresome.
3. The writing is amateurish and stiff. Requires an editor.
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