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I've thought at every book in this trilogy, that intro of having the characters in a wholly different situation set in the future, is a truly useless and damaging portion of the book.
Why puncture the tension and possibility of the current plot by leaping forward to a point which shows the characters clearly survived the current danger hale and whole. Like for goodness sake. Your plot was enough. Don't leap forward.
— Jun 17, 2020 10:16PM
Why puncture the tension and possibility of the current plot by leaping forward to a point which shows the characters clearly survived the current danger hale and whole. Like for goodness sake. Your plot was enough. Don't leap forward.
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