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Things improve now that we are past backstory. Protag doesn't know much about pairing wine with food which seems like a surprising failing for a chef.
— Jun 20, 2013 09:26PM
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Erin
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Whoever edited this book for grammar does not understand comma rule #1: a comma separates two *independent* clauses joined by a conjunction. Maybe it's the independent clause that isn't understood. The excessive inappropriate commas are distracting. (Showing just how compelling the book is not)
— Jun 20, 2013 09:05PM
Erin
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The blurb communicated this backstory info dump much more succinctly.
— Jun 20, 2013 09:02PM
