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Emily
Emily is 13% done
Doesn't start 'moment protagonist's life changed', but did fairly closely - night before he went away to special school. Probably could have skipped that part and flashed back if necessary.
Jun 20, 2013 12:35PM
Starbounders: A Sci-Fi Adventure of Action, Humor, and Space Missions for Kids (Ages 8-12)

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Emily
Emily is 13% done
Should have said *why* Zach was jealous about not going to school a few years ago (sounds like it's because his brother was going). We didn't know at the time he had a big brother, and it sounded like his parents were holding him from going at the same age as other kids - very different story setup.
Jun 20, 2013 12:37PM
Starbounders: A Sci-Fi Adventure of Action, Humor, and Space Missions for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Emily
Emily is 13% done
Why are there so many references of 'things we haven't told you' from Zach's parents, and yet they don't seem at all concerned about sending him to this school?
Jun 20, 2013 12:37PM
Starbounders: A Sci-Fi Adventure of Action, Humor, and Space Missions for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Emily
Emily is 13% done
Why are all the adults back in time to have kids? Is there a reason for this, or is the worldbuilding just not thoroughly thought through?
Jun 20, 2013 12:36PM
Starbounders: A Sci-Fi Adventure of Action, Humor, and Space Missions for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Emily
Emily is 13% done
Doesn't start 'moment protagonist's life changed', but did fairly closely - night before he went away to special school. Probably could have skipped that part and flashed back if necessary.
Jun 20, 2013 12:35PM
Starbounders: A Sci-Fi Adventure of Action, Humor, and Space Missions for Kids (Ages 8-12)


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