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Note to self: buy Emmy Laybourne a big poster that says "show: don't tell". Clearly the rudimentary first rule of good writing slipped past her. "Open highway (open meaning that there was one clear lane with no obstacles to go around)". I believe that merits a "you don't say..."
— Jun 19, 2013 11:05AM
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Erikka
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So, on page 15, Niko fixes the mask Alex tells him is crooked...and on pg 27, Alex says "I guess the mask got pushed to the side..." Is early onset Alzheimer's a symptom now? Did you forget that, 12 pgs ago, you're the one who said "fix it"?!
— Jun 19, 2013 11:20AM
