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Starting Chapter 15 - I keep hoping this will get better.
— Jun 04, 2010 12:55PM
Jon
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Starting Chapter 12 - I keep falling asleep; still slogging through prevalent passive voice; horror just not my thing.
— Jun 04, 2010 06:54AM
Jon
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Starting Chapter 9 - Somewhat thin, occasional annoying passive voice, still no connection to characters.
— Jun 03, 2010 08:44AM
Jon
is on page 50 of 228
Starting Chapter 6 - Still not engaging with the characters.
— Jun 02, 2010 11:54AM
Jon
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Starting Chapter 2 - Not my normal gentry, so I'm not connecting with any characters yet. Of course, it's only been one chapter so far.
— Jun 02, 2010 07:24AM
