Elizabeth Smith’s Reviews > The Garden > Status Update

So far, the writing is so flowery (pun intended) that it's no longer enjoyable. Words get misused or are so hyperbolic that they barely make sense.
"Stabbing his eyelids over his irises as he battles her..."
"Her voratious hair leaves her shoulders bare"
I want to support the cause she writes for, and I want to see where the story goes, but I can barely stand the attempts at grandiose language.