Eldarwen’s Reviews > Kydona > Status Update

Where was all this action and plot at the beginning of the book?!

Well well, we're finally getting somewhere!

I'm hesitating between thinking it reads like an unedited first draft and thinking this could actually start being rather good.

The writing is lacking a certain finesse. The story may be slow in coming but it's starting to go somewhere interesting if the hints are anything to go by.