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Aneta
is 71% done
i do have to give credit where it's due: the characters who keep professing they care and want to help the poor? actually go out and do that in a crisis. characters who claim to be good at fighting? are actually that when it comes to an action scene. i worried this would be all tell no show but it actually does quite a lot of showing
— May 08, 2020 12:24PM
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Aneta
is 94% done
“It’s not your job to die for me, not tonight. I forbid it.”
She almost laughed, but he was so serious, scowling at her through the rain. “It is my job, you just don’t seem to realise that.”
the personality jumped out!
— May 09, 2020 10:33AM
She almost laughed, but he was so serious, scowling at her through the rain. “It is my job, you just don’t seem to realise that.”
the personality jumped out!
Aneta
is 84% done
i like the complicated and frustrating politics happening behind the scenes, feels so real
— May 09, 2020 06:34AM
Aneta
is 80% done
i was sceptical but i will say the sports game as culmination of the unit's training was pretty satisfying to read
— May 09, 2020 03:48AM
Aneta
is 61% done
somehow this book's focus became ... a sports game ... and i don't appreciate it
— May 08, 2020 07:49AM
Aneta
is 44% done
could it be that talyn's beginning to see through her family's utopia? i hope that's the storyline at least bc there's nothing more boring than "the dumnorix are perfect our country is perfect and this other country sucks in every way compared to our perfection"
— May 08, 2020 02:11AM
Aneta
is 29% done
i can see why the author did this particular thing and i'm not saying it won't be interesting in the long run, but for now she effectively turned talyn into a smurfette character which i do not like one bit
— May 07, 2020 10:58AM
