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He is a really good short story writer. He uses drama very well in forming paragraphs to emphasise a point in the behaviour of society. One particular place was where the interviewee was counting blessings and bad news. A daughter was born. That's what the end of the paragraph emphasised. It was really well done. And it hurt. It drove the point home.
— Apr 24, 2020 02:49PM
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Debalina
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"Some small things I couldn't tell you"-
My day was bad. Work-wise, okay. But otherwise bad. People I knew are no more. One had passed away a few months ago. An uncle who used to annoy me a lot when I was young. Talked to aunty. Cried a bit. Read stories of Kashmir not about insurgency. And then a letter from a dying father to his son got me out of that shroud. Life is weird.
Happy reading! Now always though.
— Apr 29, 2020 03:38PM
My day was bad. Work-wise, okay. But otherwise bad. People I knew are no more. One had passed away a few months ago. An uncle who used to annoy me a lot when I was young. Talked to aunty. Cried a bit. Read stories of Kashmir not about insurgency. And then a letter from a dying father to his son got me out of that shroud. Life is weird.
Happy reading! Now always though.
Debalina
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A photo with Barack Obama. What the grand means to one who is so little? And, why?
— Apr 28, 2020 01:32PM
Debalina
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... contd.
The chaos that comes with the arbitrary-ness of the dalily life isn't as dangerous when the society is stable. But with armed insurgency and army and passionately opposite opinions, the innocent arbitrariness pays a price. It was heartbreaking.
— Apr 23, 2020 03:20PM
The chaos that comes with the arbitrary-ness of the dalily life isn't as dangerous when the society is stable. But with armed insurgency and army and passionately opposite opinions, the innocent arbitrariness pays a price. It was heartbreaking.
Debalina
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Read the first story. The transistor.
The first few lines seemed very 90s cinematic with a tear glistening being pained in words with somewhat visible effort at quality. But then came the characters. True, short and not so thoughtful, as most of us are. I really liked that.
... contd.
— Apr 23, 2020 03:18PM
The first few lines seemed very 90s cinematic with a tear glistening being pained in words with somewhat visible effort at quality. But then came the characters. True, short and not so thoughtful, as most of us are. I really liked that.
... contd.
