Andreas’s Reviews > Murder at White Oak > Status Update
Andreas
is 55% done
This becoming more and more painstaking to read. Every person has a bunch of names that are randomly used in the narrative. This is probably meant to be easening, but it's just distracting. Also Jacob or Jake or Weston is the omniscient and omnipotent superhero that never fails and always safes the day. Whereas Tim or Timothy or Timmy or Ashlock is almost always the damsel in distress. It's tiresome. DNF
— Apr 13, 2020 08:45AM
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