Megan’s Reviews > Midwinter Blood > Status Update

Part III .... and getting closer to finishing this never ending book.

Again with weird writing. One minute it’s dialogue of conversation, nothing unusual then it’ll show “Johan: They seem harmless, let’s say historically minded individuals.”
Why do we need to write his statement out like that when we’re already 3/4 through the page?

It’s starting to flow a little bit better....

I really don’t like the main character. Also, the writing is kind of weird. It’s like she’s having conversations in her own head, but sometimes I can’t tell and then I’m all confused.

A little weird. The victim, as a dead body, details certain portions of the story; Like when they’re setting up the crime scent tent and materials. Already found a few grammatical errors too. But I’ll be continuing.....