Elithanathile’s Reviews > Play with Me > Status Update

// This one wasn't a success for me!!

// Anyone who knows me knows that I absolutely adore a massive book or series, the bigger the better! A huge book is a wonderful wonderful thing! However, this author specifically manages to turn it into something else! It seems this author says so much without actually saying anything at all ... she is so long-winded, without actually saying anything of importance, and anything of importance gets lost in her ramble!

// Ferrets dook they don’t chirp and they don’t normally make that much noise, they do not go up to people and greet them with a sound if they don’t know them, it’s not that common it, it’s in fact incredibly rare! They dook when they were having fun, or are in their war dance, etc.!!

// Why on earth would anyone save you, Slade, you sadistic rapist sex trafficking bastard!?!!! You deserve to get blown to bits, good riddance to bad rubbish!!

// Ferrets eyes are not actually black, they just appear that way in regular lighting, but if you see their eyes in light like with the sunlight you’ll see that they’re actually brown, ferrets have beautiful eyes 😊!!

// Also, author, if you’re going to write about it then know what you’re talking about, Slade is not a sociopath, he’s a psychopath!!

// “It’s okay,” Cassidy instantly reassured him. “Tell us, Kendal, were you being raped or assaulted or do you think it was consensual sex that you were having?”

~ Author, what kind of fucking question is this?! If a guy was unconscious/doesn’t remember, and the next thing he woke up to was getting fucked/raped, then he couldn’t possible give consent, he was incapable of consenting, it is fucking RAPE!

// This author needs to knock it off with all the redundancy, why does she feel the need to stay hard steel?!? Steel, by definition, is hard!!

// You mean you didn’t already say something you regret?!? You’re a fucking asshole Corey, be a fucking friend! Everything you just said to Luca is the most snide and petty thing you could’ve said, and you’re no friend at all! Telling Luca that Kane is going to break his heart one day just he wait and see? What kind of friend does that? None, that’s what!!

// Now Luca is annoying me! Can’t this author write MC’s that are simultaneously enjoyable to read about … Does one of them have to be annoying at any given point in time?!