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Eren
is 15% done
Another issue I’m having with this book is the set up. It’s well... boring. And the amount of times it starts with someone’s first and last name and some bio is annoying to say the least. I do not care about these random characters even a little.
— Mar 24, 2020 09:58PM
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Eren
is 16% done
I think the worst thing an author can do is make a bibliophile character constantly quote books. It just makes the character look like a pretentious asshole rather than relatable to readers, which is my problem with the main character. He’s more of a cardboard cutout than a character.
— Mar 25, 2020 04:47PM
Eren
is 10% done
Slowly moseying along. The book is really not good quality like it kind of feels like the writing is amateur with a lot of pointless dialogue and most of the characters are one note with a lot of irrelevant information about them repeated in an attempt to flesh them out. Glad I got it free.
— Mar 24, 2020 09:22PM
