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kinda book I’d like more as non-fiction... that is NOT a compliment. quarantine’s the only reason I’m holding onto this one at all.
— Mar 17, 2020 04:52PM
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Campbell Andrews
is on page 113 of 275
the furor over Goodyear’s “run-in” is overblown. wouldn’t amount to more than a scrolling chyron. and his “mysterious” problem is obvious.
— Mar 17, 2020 04:48PM
Campbell Andrews
is on page 112 of 275
these sportswriter interstitials are INTERMINABLE
— Mar 17, 2020 04:46PM
Campbell Andrews
is on page 63 of 275
The diction is haphazard... Ms. Nemens is too fond of the dash— not of the parenthetical variety, but the dash-as-joiner
— Mar 16, 2020 09:22AM
Campbell Andrews
is on page 34 of 275
“And Michael still thinks of swinging a bat as he thrusts.”
No. No no no no no... not only is this (and the following sentence) bad sex writing, it breaks the voice as set up in the first chapter. ugh
— Mar 15, 2020 01:41PM
No. No no no no no... not only is this (and the following sentence) bad sex writing, it breaks the voice as set up in the first chapter. ugh
