Claire B **paused for now**’s Reviews > Taking Control > Status Update
Claire B **paused for now**
is 97% done
More showing, less telling would have really improved this read.
*3 Stars*
— Jan 14, 2020 04:56PM
*3 Stars*
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Claire B **paused for now**’s Previous Updates
Claire B **paused for now**
is 23% done
This needs more world building and a better sense of place.
— Jan 14, 2020 09:38AM
