Tate Deroos’s Reviews > Doll Bones > Status Update

The antagonist in my story is Zach’s dad. Why I say this is because the dad wants Zach to be an all time football player. But Zach wants to hang out with his friends and play this game called doll bones. What the dad does is he keeps Zach from seeing his friends. So this is kind of like character vs character because Zach wants to do something that he like and his dad is keeping out of it.

The most tense part of my book right now is when Zach’s dad and Zach were having a fight. Then Zach’s dad got so mad that’s he through out all of the toys that Zach would play with his friends. I think that this has a anticipation of conflict because this might foreshadow something later in the book. For example them two coming together and having a good ending.

My unsympathetic character is Zach’s dad. Zach’s dad is an unsympathetic because he doesn’t like Zach having friends that are girls and he thinks that it is getting in front of his football skills. So he doesn't let Zach play with them and that was a really jerky thing to do.

The point of view in my story is the 3rd person omniscient because the book tells me that the narrator is not in the book and he/she is telling me about all of the main characters feelings.