Elithanathile’s Reviews > Inside Out > Status Update
Elithanathile
is 40% done
// Author, I get that you're trying to give us an idea of what sone spaces look like, simply for ambience and world building, but DUDE, sooooooo much detail!! We don't need interior design info-dumping EVERY time a character walks into a structure!! If it's not pertinent to the story, spare us, and just keep on with the story!!!!!
— Dec 23, 2019 03:38PM
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Elithanathile
is finished
// Meh ... like a rollercoaster, this took a moderate climb, then somehow, a pretty massive drop!! The only difference between this book and a rollercoaster however was that this book wasn't exciting in the slightest!!!
— Dec 25, 2019 04:57AM
Elithanathile
is 84% done
// What's this author doing??? I have to admit I'm not a fan of how often this author ends up being a hard fail [book wise]/miss, but the fact that she does have good ones/hits is what keeps me giving her chances!! I don't get this author's insistence on ruining a good thing SO FAR with all kinds of new nonsense!!! What's with the use of "love" as a casual endearment all of a sudden? It's ill placed and obnoxious!!!!
— Dec 24, 2019 04:46PM
Elithanathile
is 80% done
// For a book that mentions them having had sex we only get one explicit seen with them and the rest are mere passing mentions!!! What's the point, author!!!!!! Give us the scenes and stop telling us everything!!!!!!!!!
Also, holy crap, where do Cybil and Heather get off!!!!!
— Dec 24, 2019 04:27PM
Also, holy crap, where do Cybil and Heather get off!!!!!
Elithanathile
is 65% done
// I don't know what to say ... though not much is going on here, it just works ... this book is "feel good" ... easy-going, sweet, and idealistic ... not much happens beyond that, but again, it just works and I'm okay with that here, just for the sake of this book :-)!!
These two are also very sweet together :-)!!
— Dec 24, 2019 08:08AM
These two are also very sweet together :-)!!
Elithanathile
is 64% done
// Let's face it, nothing really happens here, the characters are not well fleshed out at all, and overall, the story is quite monotonous & bland!! BUT, it's sweet & easy-going, and that's what I'm in the mood for right now ... so this book is okay! The author isn't showcasing any talent here whatsoever though; this could have been written by anyone! Still, it's like a comfy little stroll that gives the mind a break!
— Dec 24, 2019 08:00AM
Elithanathile
is 62% done
// So the group that so vehemently had the kids' back is now pussying out in the line of fire >:-o!! What a bunch of twats >:-o!!!
— Dec 24, 2019 07:43AM
Elithanathile
is 57% done
// Rawr ... smooth talker indeed! You go, Romeo ;-)!!
— Dec 24, 2019 06:53AM

