kimberly_rose’s Reviews > Beneath the Skin > Status Update
kimberly_rose
is 76% done
Really amazingly well done emotions and corresponding behaviours, but it’s dragging now. Repeat Darlings need to be killed.
— Aug 27, 2019 03:25AM
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kimberly_rose
is 80% done
Really excellent story, with characters I cared about, dragged down to irritating story, with characters I was impatient toward, by a lack of (or ignoring of) editorial advice: chop those unnecessary, repetitive inner monologue bits out and move the plot along quicker, my friend.
— Sep 21, 2019 02:32PM
