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Chapter 4.
Not impressed so far. Language doesn’t flow- syntax either; here too few commas, here too few. Word choice and plot generic so far, likewise characters.
— Aug 06, 2019 02:14PM
Not impressed so far. Language doesn’t flow- syntax either; here too few commas, here too few. Word choice and plot generic so far, likewise characters.
