Anish Kohli’s Reviews > From All The Directions- An inspiration turned into poetics > Status Update

"I not always bring the pain.
If I‟m breaking your heart today,
I‟ll be the one to mend it.
Just let me sweep away the floor."

"Powerless at times
Thou considered powerful by you.
All I can say is, lemme go
Because that‟s the only way
You to be free,
The pain will be lightened,
Marks may remain,
But I‟ll engage you on up-next
In my own way."

I think.....the author is confusing 'though' and 'thou'. Also...

"Joy with sun, thunder and rain-droop"/

Please tell me I am naive and that I don't know enough about language to know that "Rain-droop" is a thing that has been known to all since ages.

"A gender above a child!
Why a parent to be ever want?"

How am I the only one who's seeing what's wrong with this book and these sentences that I am quoting? Good lord above, why am I the one who's gotta be the "cruel reviewer" who shows the true picture to a freshly minted author about their book?

"He lost 'Her' in his lust,
Turning the love into rust."

"I remember, being haunted,
By your thoughts and crying.
But, I stop-realizing, why to transport,
To the time that is flying."

"I‟ve heard time flies,
That it rides on horse,
But this moment is pretending 'still',
This day is passing away with lose."

With Lose? Lose what? WHAT?

"Realise it what‟s awaited,
Don‟t stuck in general."

So basically, one debut author rates 5 stars another debut author's book and they do the same for you. Just like on social media, like for like, follow for follow, and thus fudging up the ratings, yeah? Perfect setup!

"Dream not of some building,
Dream not of a sky.
If you dream,
Dream a little high."

Wow! Just wow!!!!