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FINALLY SOME PLOT.
Although even I'm sick of the rain they're tromping through. That's getting monotonous.
Kristoff has finally stopped with his world-building and his verbose scene-building has eased up and there's even dialogue now. Dialogue! Starting to see some new interpersonal conflict too. Finally.
— Aug 03, 2019 11:18AM
Although even I'm sick of the rain they're tromping through. That's getting monotonous.
Kristoff has finally stopped with his world-building and his verbose scene-building has eased up and there's even dialogue now. Dialogue! Starting to see some new interpersonal conflict too. Finally.
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Questingforaquest
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Still draggingly slow and too dense with scenery descriptions in flowery prose,but I told myself I'd finish this one.It's got to get better at some point,right?Kristoff's got to set up the world and feel of everything and then can get into the plot.Once he's done with the former he can do just the latter...right?
— Apr 30, 2018 09:35AM
