Status Update

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 66% done

'Peter Pan grinned, his green eyes twinkling with that mischievous merriment she had so frequently told. He gently lowered her to the seat beside him in the row boat, and placed a quieting finger to his lips.'

for one of the MOST pivotal characters in the whole Neverland origins Peter sure isn't being given enough time nor importance here even though he's brilliant and better for Wendy than *gags* Hook

— Jul 18, 2019 10:38AM

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♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 95% done

'The green expanded, flashed, and went out.'

SERIES RUINED

— Jul 18, 2019 12:19PM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 93% done

all right, this book did the one thing I'm gonna kinda hate it for

— Jul 18, 2019 12:11PM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 92% done

'He was the man who had captured her heart as surely as he’d once captured her, and had yet to let it go.'

nothing about this is healthy nor romantic . . . at least when Peter took Wendy to Neverland he had the decency to ASK and she willingly accepted hngggggggggggg

— Jul 18, 2019 11:14AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 90% done

'waterfalls of shimmering caramel and cocoa scented hair'

chill out Hook we all know this is your Wendy fetish

— Jul 18, 2019 11:12AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 89% done

'Above and behind the figurehead rose the wooden beam of the bowsprit, long and lean.'

I like the way you think Peter and this is why I love you

— Jul 18, 2019 11:11AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 89% done

well finally something truly interesting

— Jul 18, 2019 11:07AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 85% done

'“You shouldn’t have come back to this ship alone,” he told her, reprimanding her softly, like a father to a child… like a friend or a lover. “But I knew that you would. And I’m pleased that you did.”

ewwwww no that comparison does NOT belong and also the entirety of this scene feels weird and gross

— Jul 18, 2019 11:03AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 77% done

'Hook had lived seventy-three years when he was pulled into Neverland. However, by the human standards of the world Peter Pan originally came from, and from which Wendy came as well, he would be in his twenties.'

uh no final straw DISLIKE

— Jul 18, 2019 10:52AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 75% done

'“I hate it when leaders empathize with their subjects,” Peter said mockingly. “So irritating!”'

gosh I love Peter so much

— Jul 18, 2019 10:49AM

♠ TABI⁷ ♠ is 72% done

I really am just so tired of retellings picking Hook as the romantic option

a) why have romance vs a stirring, epic adventure

b) pick someone else besides Hook . . . or even Peter!!

— Jul 18, 2019 10:48AM

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