Furbjr’s Reviews > Operation 9/11 > Status Update

I like the way the story is flowing, but there are a lot of hurdles in the way of my enjoyment of the story. This has turned from a leisurely read into a bit of a headache, owing to a lot of awkward language usage and syntax problems. So instead a fun read, I'm obsessively proof reading and editing this book.

THE STORY IS GOOD, but thee is Mich editing to ne done in this book.

I am quite enjoying this book. However, it is apparent that the writer is not a native speaker of English. Some of the words he uses are not formatted correctly, or are just strange choices for words. I think careful scrutiny by an experienced editor would have served the author/audience really well.

I am quite enjoying this book. However, it is apparent that the writer is not a native speaker of English. Some of the words he uses are not formatted correctly, or are just strange choices for words. I think careful scrutiny by an experienced editor would have served the author/audience really well.