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1. The prose here is...tedious.
2. Not reality= Going all zen to kill a deer with a stick when you have a gun. Reality=Indiana Jones pulls out his gun and shoots the swordsman
3. Winston is a very suburban dog. Not sure what the point is of including him when all you do is yell "Winston! Winston! Winston! Winston!"
4. I predict that Steven is going to eat his gun.
5. All P-A characters eventually lose their gear.
— May 22, 2019 12:16PM
2. Not reality= Going all zen to kill a deer with a stick when you have a gun. Reality=Indiana Jones pulls out his gun and shoots the swordsman
3. Winston is a very suburban dog. Not sure what the point is of including him when all you do is yell "Winston! Winston! Winston! Winston!"
4. I predict that Steven is going to eat his gun.
5. All P-A characters eventually lose their gear.
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