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kenzie bennett is 21% done
I’m frustrated with how little the mother seems to have passed on to her child. Like best case scenario you die elderly and leave your kid behind, said kid still needs to be able to function without your presence. So far this is greatly stressing me out, and not in the fun “thrill of a great adventure” way, but in a “why are people so stupid” way.
May 22, 2019 12:02AM
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kenzie bennett
kenzie bennett is 60% done
Someone needs to get Kristy a new editor. There are a plethora of grammar and spelling mistakes, as well as inconsistencies during dialogue. This had so much potential to be good, so far a great let down
May 23, 2019 01:18AM
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