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Andrew Poland is on page 80 of 692
Although I understand the need to give backstory, one gets to a point where they exclaim: "get on with the $&$@ story already!" The placement of flashback scenes, while plausible to a degree, interrupts the flow of action. This leaves the reader confused, irritated, and losing interest fast. I was tempted to give up on this, but have resolved to see it through.
Jan 18, 2013 02:25AM
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I really like the idea of the second bridegroom but as beautiful as the author's writing is, it gets tedious.
Jan 16, 2013 03:47AM
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