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Ugh. The "Introduction" irked me and turned me off completely. So far the narrative is clunky and filled with cliche after cliche writing. Painful early read.
— Jan 07, 2013 06:16PM
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Charity
is on page 176 of 331
Too many words used really poorly. Want to take a pen and edit.
— Jan 08, 2013 03:29PM
Charity
is on page 124 of 331
There are points where it feels like a sentence is screaming "see how well crafted and clever I am" when really it is so poorly written and pedantic.
— Jan 07, 2013 07:53PM
