Wordsworth’s Reviews > A Cinderella Affair > Status Update

I can't believe this book has an average of 4.5 stars! I wanted to be generous with it-- I like the characters and the general idea of the plot-- but the craft is really lacking. It feels like the work of a 10th grader who wrote as ideas occurred to her, resulting in painfully contorted sentences, run-ons, fragments, and redundancies. For some unfathomable reason these problems weren't touched by the editing process.