Chira’s Reviews > Bright Ruin > Status Update
Chira
is 21% done
This continues to be clumsy, including some more dialogue and actions that sound more like an alien trying to pass as human than actual human actions.
— Mar 31, 2019 10:53AM
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Chira
is 25% done
YOU CAN'T EXPLODE WATER
WHAT DOES THE GLASSWARE BEING PRUSSIAN HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH HOW THE GLASS SHRAPNEL DISTRIBUTES
A SHARD THAT LEAVES A TWO INCH GASH IS NOT "SLENDER"
DON'T PICK OUT GLASS SHARDS WITH POLISHED NAILS YOU WILL HAVE NO GRIP ON THEM
GOD.
— Mar 31, 2019 12:10PM
WHAT DOES THE GLASSWARE BEING PRUSSIAN HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH HOW THE GLASS SHRAPNEL DISTRIBUTES
A SHARD THAT LEAVES A TWO INCH GASH IS NOT "SLENDER"
DON'T PICK OUT GLASS SHARDS WITH POLISHED NAILS YOU WILL HAVE NO GRIP ON THEM
GOD.
Chira
is 8% done
It's encouraging I don't seem to have missed anything by skipping the second book entirely - two chapters in and the characters have all gone over exactly what happened of importance in the second book and there has been no tangible character development I feel I've missed.
— Mar 30, 2019 10:09AM
