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As riveting as this story is, there is one major flaw I'm seeing, that the main story gets derailed by a very, very, very long story-within-the-story. The main characters shouldn't be missing from one fourth of the book, and that's what it's starting to feel like as this urban legend story in an old diner takes center stage while Dan and Abe fade into the background of their own drama.
— Mar 17, 2019 04:42PM

