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Ms. McFaul
is 62% done
I wonder if it's her. She's the killer, and someone is pulling her strings....
— Feb 22, 2019 09:36AM
Ms. McFaul
is 59% done
Luca=illusion she's created? Is she herself an illusion? Is no one real? Is the proprietor the only real creature that exists?
— Feb 22, 2019 08:15AM
Ms. McFaul
is 18% done
Not that impressed...too much telling and not enough showing. Unlike Caraval and The Night Circus, the fantastical elements and the amazing people who exist in these creations need to be shown rather than told. I'm hoping that it gets better?
— Feb 20, 2019 08:51AM
