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There's everything you'd want in a Sean Michael book: kink, sweetness, gruffness, healing cock, all the good stuff.
There's also all the usual Sean Michael mistakes: clearly he was told "never say said" so conversations between four people just begin like:
"Dialogue without tag to tell you who is speaking."
"Response from... someone!"
"Dialogue." Followed by action from character who's replying to 1st dialogue.
— Feb 16, 2019 11:48PM
There's also all the usual Sean Michael mistakes: clearly he was told "never say said" so conversations between four people just begin like:
"Dialogue without tag to tell you who is speaking."
"Response from... someone!"
"Dialogue." Followed by action from character who's replying to 1st dialogue.
