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Tim
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Getting a deeper insight into the past was interesting. However the first part of the chapter was a bit boring for me.
— Feb 18, 2019 01:29PM
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Tim
is on page 132 of 343
some boring parts some interesting parts. It depends whether you like the topics that are discussed.
— Feb 10, 2019 09:39AM
Tim
is on page 90 of 343
some parts were boring but most parts were interesting and some even showed new thoughts. Like how free humans really can be and that if there is a socialist world everyone could become more like that and gets happier.
— Jan 24, 2019 03:03PM
Tim
is on page 76 of 343
Interesting story develops. However the dialoge is not as realistic as I expected. The villain is too easily deceived. But it's ok. Doing everything in a more realistic manner wouldn't change much the story only might bring a bit more tension. Which is not really necessary.
— Jan 21, 2019 02:18PM
Tim
is on page 62 of 343
gets a bit lengthy in chapter 5. Discribing landscapes situations seems fine for me but describing people too long is not interesting for me.
— Jan 20, 2019 12:43PM
