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I’m liking it quite a lot, yet it makes me roll my eyes a bit when Jack talks like a 30 year old instead of like an actual teenager.
Feb 16, 2019 04:04PM
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Libby is a hot mess. One night she's on the verge of a binging episode, having a panic attack and fainting, and the next morning she's "making a statement" wearing a bikini to school thinking in this way she's somehow teaching a lesson in kindness (?) of all things to all the girls in school.
Mar 07, 2019 10:04AM
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Libby is a hot mess: one night she's on the verge of a binging episode, having a panic attack and fainting, and the next morning she's "making a statement" wearing a bikini to school thinking in this way she's somehow teaching a lesson in kindness (?) of all things to all the girls in school.
Mar 07, 2019 09:53AM
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"It is my job in life, apparently, to teach gawking, laughing girls lessons about kindness." says Libby as she confuses self-confidence with kindness...
Mar 07, 2019 09:48AM
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The overuse of italics and all caps is getting annoying. Also, I have to read through paragraphs like this:

"I'm actually driving a car. Like a normal person. Like that person passing me on the other side of the road. Like the person in front of me. Like the person behind me. Like all these people walking down the street who probably have cars and licenses of their own. I AM DRIVING A CAR!"
Feb 20, 2019 07:54AM
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