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Bronwyn Heeley
is 39% done
I’m confused. It really happened? It was a dream.
The book scene jumps in the most jarring way and therefore when it needs to be jarring it comes across as normal which is confusing in a way the author isn’t intending, oh yes confused, wonder, interest, you can tell that what we need to feel but it’s not what I’m feeling, because it’s meant to be abnormal when in fact it just feels normal ...
— Feb 12, 2019 04:07AM
The book scene jumps in the most jarring way and therefore when it needs to be jarring it comes across as normal which is confusing in a way the author isn’t intending, oh yes confused, wonder, interest, you can tell that what we need to feel but it’s not what I’m feeling, because it’s meant to be abnormal when in fact it just feels normal ...
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Bronwyn Heeley
is 78% done
Huh, ok, I didn’t see that. Not shocking but the fact I guessed most everything else, this was interesting 😊
— Feb 13, 2019 08:30PM
Bronwyn Heeley
is 52% done
Intrigued and bored. It’s a good quality because it means I’ll finish this and most def pick up the next in the series when it comes out. There’s a lot of potential as this reads very fresh faced and just learning :)
— Feb 12, 2019 04:28AM
Bronwyn Heeley
is 39% done
Jarring scene jumps with recaps, it’s very very tell
— Feb 12, 2019 04:08AM
Bronwyn Heeley
is 23% done
I’m not really enjoying the writing, I’m finding it very.... clipped tho that’s not really it either. It’s not short sentence or anything that would make it that way but honestly it’s the only way I feel I can discribe it
— Feb 12, 2019 03:46AM
