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Context: one of the MCs was just shot in the chest.
"His ribs heaved, and the wound made an even more obscene, wet, farting noise. [...] I clapped my hand over it in midfart, sealing the hole so he could breathe. I swear, that's what it says!
— Dec 10, 2012 03:10PM
"His ribs heaved, and the wound made an even more obscene, wet, farting noise. [...] I clapped my hand over it in midfart, sealing the hole so he could breathe. I swear, that's what it says!
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I was about to make a comment about a reference to a "proudly upturned cock" but then I read this: "My own cock tapped gently under my navel, in time with my heartbeat, like a polite but insistent bill collector" *snortgiggle*
— Dec 10, 2012 02:51PM
