Mel’s Reviews > Jane, Unlimited > Status Update

This book is a 3/5 overall for me

Cool concept, just badly executed.

I don't think the 5 stories go well together and the writing is so basic it was difficult for me to follow at times. It took me too long to read. Might have been 4 stars otherwise

I read this book mostly for the lgbt rep and it was fine ig. Treated like normal at least. yey for wlw couples!! Ravi's pansexuality? was VERY stereotypical tho yikes

5: strayhound 2/5

Not what I was expecting
The fantasy setting doesn't fit with this story AT ALL
I either missed or hated the references this ending was obviously inspired by through the looking glass and the worldbuilding was terrible as the dog said STOP TALKING AND SHOW US
I wish the rship w Ivy had been developed more nice rep tho

After reading this ending I want to change my rating for the first story to 3/5

3. Charlotte

Surprisingly well written tho i'm not completely sold on this story turning into the fantasy realm 4/5

well damn now that's good writing,,, how much the atmosphere has changed in 10 pages,,, really good job i loved this creepy scene

2: lies without borders

def an improvement from the rest of the stories. the best ending so far 4/5

finally a good written story