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I feel that the author tries too hard to be deep and meaningful in every sentence. It's almost cliche and cheesy to me.
Jan 05, 2019 11:10PM
The Alchemist

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Emma is on page 11 of 197
I appreciate the simplicity of the writing, but at the same time it makes Paulo's writing style very unengaging. So far the book seems to be reminiscent of the Bible and fables and somewhat spiritual. The author tells instead of shows and the overarching moral message or lesson of the book could be more subtle.

"The jacket had a purpose, and so did the boy. His purpose in life was to travel."
Jan 05, 2019 04:13PM
The Alchemist


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