Nancy’s Reviews > The Bargain > Status Update

I'm not sure I understand why they are so twisted up and angsty over what has happened to them and between them. I feel like they have blown most of it out of proportion. They need to toughen up and get the hell over it. Try talking honestly and maturely to each other about their past, present and hopes for the future.

Who the heck is Mary? I thought Lindsey's housekeepers name was Luisa.

I have no idea how old Molly is. At first I thought she was maybe a few months old, then it seems she was just one month when her mum died and her mum has been dead for one month, so that would make her two months old. Then a page or two ago I read that she is five months old! WTF...get the details right.

Just a little frustration at things like, speech marks left off and the occasional change to different speaker in the same paragraph...which means you have to work out that it's someone else talking etc. Also their lack of communication...which of course is part of the story anyway so I'll wait and see what happens :)