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"Her eyes met Harry’s for the first time. She looked at him beseechingly, but he shook his head and she turned away bitterly"

what is this honestly.... they literally dated for one month? this is not healthy.

"It’s all right for you two, isn’t it, with your parents
safely out of the way —”

ron saying this was extremely ugly...

“My mother,” said Ron one night, as they sat in the tent on a
riverbank in Wales, “can make good food appear out of thin air.”

“This is You-Know-Who we’re talking about, right? Not you?”
inquired Ron.

"I wouldn’t know what I’d done if I’d been possessed, would I? Ginny told me there were times when she couldn’t remember anything"
how has he forgotten that he was possessed by voldemort and he knew everything that was happening at the time?

she gave umbridge a cat patronus! this is slander against cats.

"The Muggles who lived in Grimmauld Place had long
since accepted the amusing mistake in the numbering that had
caused number eleven to sit beside number thirteen"

do british people not do odd/even numbering?

"Her face had a carved quality about it. Harry thought of photos of Native Americans he’d seen as he studied her dark eyes, high cheekbones, and straight nose, formally composed above a high-necked silk gown."

white brits really think writing this is normal. incredible this wasn't edited out.

"There was a little too much understanding in the smile Hermione gave him for Harry’s liking."

luna is the only one who has ever understood harry's grief.

"They had had a cat . . . perhaps it had perished, like his parents, at
Godric’s Hollow . . . or else fled when there was nobody left to feed
it. . . . Sirius had bought him his first broomstick. . . . "

jkr always writes harry's grief really tenderly... i appreciate that.