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Joey Anderson
Joey Anderson is 10% done
Pretty slow, and the multiple first-person narration becomes a bit annoying. It would be nice to have a more global view.
Dec 29, 2018 04:57PM
The Orenda

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Joey Anderson
Joey Anderson is 60% done
Okay. Becoming more of a catalog of Wendat customs than a novel. Not much to push or pull the reader through the narrative.
Jan 23, 2019 12:29AM
The Orenda


Joey Anderson
Joey Anderson is 41% done
Okay, but the pace is slow, not much happens to gain interest, and the style is ordinary.
Jan 14, 2019 10:11PM
The Orenda


Joey Anderson
Joey Anderson is 20% done
This novel begins to make more sense as the different narratives start to merge. The novel portrays the priest as an egotistical coward, and the Huron are quite sympathetic.
Jan 08, 2019 11:01PM
The Orenda


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