Dylan > Status Update

what is currently happening in my book is that Jack is looking for things to start the snowmobile but he is mad that he found the necessary parts and is going to lie about finding the battery.

the main character bounces around but I like Danny the most because it is just so weird how he can read minds and he has sort of a second sight so he can see into the future sometimes. I like to think I connect with him though I probably don't.

Right now Jack is questioning Mr.Ulman about the over looks history, and jacks temper is getting worse and worse. Right now I like my book but I know it will soon be at the scary parts.

"staring at the black hole the center of the brass nozzle like a bird staring at a snake." - a simile

Two things that happened in my book were: 1. The doctor prescribed Danny with psychosis even though thats not what he has but that was the doctors expert opinion. 2. another thing that happened is that in Danny's most recent "shine" Danny saw Jack in the basement of the overlook looking at a book and something bad was about to happened and now the chapter is called scrap book and he is in the basement so yeah.

I do like my text actually because it is just now getting interesting, they are at the overlook finally and so I know and I think we all know what that means.

The tone in my book is a forwarding kind of feel, because a new character was introduced and he know a lot about Danny and even called him doc before his parents told him they call Danny that, he also really wants Danny to come with him to Florida. It's as if he knows what scary stuff will happened.

I would say it is a 9/10, 8/10 maybe. I rate it this because it kinda keeps you on your toes, you never know whats going to happened.