Jo Martin’s Reviews > Ashleigh's Christmas Miracle > Status Update
Jo Martin
is on page 130 of 250
Retraining Jazz is interesting. I still think they needed some explanation about Chris needing Folly still to keep competing.
— Dec 13, 2018 12:02PM
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Jo Martin
is on page 212 of 250
That was a really good conversation between them.
— Dec 15, 2018 01:13AM
Jo Martin
is on page 198 of 250
They’re making me ship those two even though I’ve read the later books and know who ends up with who.
— Dec 15, 2018 12:34AM
Jo Martin
is on page 176 of 250
I feel like to make it more Christmas centred since it’s a Christmas book, they should have cut younger Christina out a bit. I know it shows her determination at a young age but the story isn’t really at her 10 y.o. self, it’s 13 and 16. And considering her birthday is on Christmas they could have done a party.
— Dec 14, 2018 07:41PM
Jo Martin
is on page 176 of 250
Well. Poor, Christina, but now I have more faith in Joanna as a writer
— Dec 14, 2018 07:23PM
Jo Martin
is on page 141 of 250
And that’s what they needed to lead with. She’s young and needs time to be trained therefore Christina does need the other horse.
— Dec 13, 2018 05:52PM
Jo Martin
is on page 114 of 250
Also disappointed this isn’t more Christmas focused. The actual novel has nothing to do with Christmas.
— Dec 13, 2018 02:57AM
Jo Martin
is on page 114 of 250
I think they needed a little explanation because the other horse was fine a chapter or so ago.
— Dec 13, 2018 02:54AM
Jo Martin
is on page 92 of 250
(2/2) He didn’t spend time waffling about because he couldn’t figure out the problem. It gave credibility to his role because he acted like he actually had experience. Sometimes Ian and Mike act like they couldn’t run a business save for their 12 year old’s and lucky streaks.
— Dec 12, 2018 12:04PM

