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Do not like this phrase: “his eyes full of concern”. it is a tense moment, everything should be in motion and on edge. Phrases like that one slow the pace and the scene seems to be too slow. Typical of this book. Needs to be faster paced.
— Nov 30, 2018 05:38PM
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The guy is evidently a criminal and a delusional killer and yet: “A deep sadness emanated from him, and she wanted to reach out and touch him, have him hold her and tell her everything was going to be okay.” What???
— Nov 30, 2018 05:20PM
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The guy is evidently a criminal and a delusional killer and yet: “A deep sadness emanated from him, and she wanted to reach out and touch him, have him hold her and tell her everything was going to be okay.” What???
