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Romance authors, a word of advice: don't ever, ever, make one of your MCs think about the other as "the kid" while they are having sex.
It's creepy in any case, but it's especially disturbing when you have to read something like this: "spreading himself over the kid".
Not hot, not sweet, just creepy. Stop it, please.
P.S.: that aside, these two are too cute for words together. :)
— Nov 26, 2018 12:42AM
It's creepy in any case, but it's especially disturbing when you have to read something like this: "spreading himself over the kid".
Not hot, not sweet, just creepy. Stop it, please.
P.S.: that aside, these two are too cute for words together. :)
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